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I second-guess myself a lot when writing verses, wondering if I should leave it open to interpretation or narrow the focus a bit. The poem I just published, News, is much more open or vague. Here’s my more focused version. Which one do you think is better?

News #2

hope loses the way
in mists of worry when news
of loved ones is scarce

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