One thought on “Restoration

  1. Sublime! (I’m trying not to use “poignant”!)

    My version below isn’t intended as an improvement but just as a way to include more imagery and make your father (?) more real through something he wore.

    scrubbing his headstone —
    the smell of his weathered gloves
    erases the years

    Beautiful slightly cool day here…just the kind of day I love to watch the yardmen mow our jungle! *hehe*

    Ron

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