7 thoughts on “Posterity

  1. Very nice! My take on changing it to a non-serious tanka below:

    old mother rabbit
    gazes at the stars — recalling
    all her children
    grown and gone she sighs and shrugs
    hare today gone tomorrow

    *hehe*

    Ron

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