January 7, 2015 by Christine Goodnough Posterity old mother rabbit gazes at the stars — recalling all her children Share this:TwitterFacebookLike this:Like Loading... Related
Very nice! My take on changing it to a non-serious tanka below: old mother rabbit gazes at the stars — recalling all her children grown and gone she sighs and shrugs hare today gone tomorrow *hehe* Ron LikeLike Reply
Oh, he’s making pun of my so poignant haiku! 🙂 Nice addition, Ron. Perhaps between us we’ll develop a new poetry form, a cross between haiku and limerick. LikeLike Reply
HAHAHA! i can’t come up with a better name than you already have. Hmmm…maybe a “lim-ku”? :>) LikeLike
Very nice! My take on changing it to a non-serious tanka below:
old mother rabbit
gazes at the stars — recalling
all her children
grown and gone she sighs and shrugs
hare today gone tomorrow
*hehe*
Ron
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Oh, he’s making pun of my so poignant haiku! 🙂
Nice addition, Ron. Perhaps between us we’ll develop a new poetry form, a cross between haiku and limerick.
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And what would we call this peculiar creature? 🙂
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A hick? a hairick? a limiku? Whatever. I’ll try one in my next post.:)
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HAHAHA! i can’t come up with a better name than you already have. Hmmm…maybe a “lim-ku”? :>)
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Okay, a limpku then.
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You gotta deal! Limku it is! 🙂
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